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A Celebration of Love (Chloe Yeoh) A Christmas Story   (Chris Dalatsoudis) A Strange Christmas' Event (Chris Mourelatos)      Our Village Feast      (Constantine Gotsis) A Strange Christmas Lunch (Dimitri Cristofaro)
Christmas Detective Story (Franceso Ambrosetti) Christmas Story (Franceso Ferrazza) A Snowy Christmas Day in Artena (Simone Riccitelli) A Christmas Story (Nicola) Halloween Glances (Benedetta Cini)
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The Magic Cloak (Francesco Cardinali) The Snowman & Santa Claus (Greta Pasquini) The Vanished Christmas Trees (Carlo Casinelli)           Theophany            (Iliana Kalenteridou) Christmas at the Royal Palace (Chiara Fioribello)
     Christmas Story     (Sara Palmiotta) Fairytale in a Poem (Ralica Nikolova) The Christmas Truce (Tapuralli Alggozziro) Christmas Story (Erica Boccadelli) Viva Las Christmas (Matteo Ruggieri)
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A Celebration of Love

 

I

Like stars in the sky

You paint someone’s dreams

Moonlight falls on your window

Celebrating the night

 

II

A confession of love

He reciprocates

Embrace ethereal delight

Blinded by euphoric emotions

 

III

Like a splash of warm water

Their lips meet

Fumbling fingers and trembling reach

Touch defines affection

 

IV

Fingers interlocked

Their hearts embrace

A seal of unity by the altar

Until death do us part

 

V

You run to your corners

Misunderstanding supersedes comprehension

Drown not in your sorrows

Love is forgiving

 

VI

Screams of words paint the walls

Beyond phantasms and dreams

The red ribbon is severed

A new life enters the world

 

VII

The baby awakens

Clenching his fists

A bundle of joy beyond all measure

Honeyed kisses on his forehead

 

VIII

Work rips through the bonds

He claims she doesn’t understand

Auntie shields the child’s ears

Innocence shall not be lost

 

IX

He takes her into his arms

Her locks of obsidian smell so sweet

Timeless, as she is

Feelings shan’t wither through time

 

X

He peeks through the sheets

Expecting rainbow wrappings

They lie on his bed

Happy Birthday, my son; they say

 

This is love, this is love.

 

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Author’s Note: A full cycle of the love between two people. I’m trying to work on metaphoric poetry which actually makes sense. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

 

Theme: Celebrations

 

Chloe Yeoh

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Comments
From: MSN Nicknamenoni_peers  (Original Message) Sent: 12/10/2007 9:24 PM
Dear all,
 
At last! The very first contribution! Thank you Chloe from GIS, Malaysia. Please feel free to comment on Chloe's work or ask her any questions under this discussion board. Her poem can be found in Documents, under Theme One. Remember when you upload your own writing,  include your name and school at the end of your work so we know who the aspiring writer is!
Am looking forward to all your contributions! Please remember your stories should be fictional and not just pieces of information on a religious or cultural celebration.
 
Leonora 
From: MSN NicknameGiulyetta_20 Sent: 1/19/2008 5:22 PM
Hi chloe! I've just read your poem and i think that is touching!
I like your choice to use metaphories for talking about Love. Have you wrote some other poem?
 
Bye, Giulia Bianchi
Hi chloe!!
I've read your wonderful poem, and I think that is very thick and exicite, because there are write somethings true and meaningful.
I prized your work specially for the rhymes and metaphories...Have you wrote some other poems!?
 
bye bye...Lavinia Minori

 

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