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Halloween Glances

 

Nina entered the place full of lights and colours. The blinding lights were an obstacle to see the dancers’ faces. The music was very loud, but this wasn’t a problem to her. The colours danced in front of her eyes like coloured flying birds. She didn’t know any of the people who were surrounding her, but everybody was smiling at her and staring at her from top to toe.

Penetrating glimpses, enquiring looks, hide-and-seek games…it wasn’t Halloween any longer, it was a celebration where you can be someone different, but just for one night: the following morning you would be back to reality.

The lights changed, the new flash-lights made everything seem slowing down and about to stop. Nina looked round: the place vas very big, there was a DJ on his stage, the upper floor where those who wanted to show off were dancing, the hall which past the cloakroom continued into a narrow corridor with a door on the right leading to the ground floor, and two other corridors surrounding the place and leading one to the bar and the other to a room where anybody could be the DJ, the captain of this crazy, deceiving Halloween night.

The dance floor was very big; the stairs led to the armchairs where you could have a rest after an unbridled dance; the stairs led to the bar, in which there were two big windows with barriers so that the people could be seen, boys and girls who were breaking out.

The music changed and became louder and louder.

A mirror ball came down from the ceiling and lighted everything up. Everybody was shouting and dancing.

Nina looked at her watch: it was midnight and Halloween had just started.

She went downstairs, she went to the main dance floor and started to move at the rhythm of music.

She shook her hips, clapped her hands and touched her hair like only she could do.

She had spent hours to get ready and now she was really wonderful in her skirt and her new top. And that silver hair-band made her feel like a star.

Lights and colours started to pass before her, as well as sounds of melodies, sighs and cries.

It was a false world because everyone had got a mask on their faces.

“Tonight I can be who I want to be” said Nina to herself “it doesn’t matter who and it doesn’t matter what people think about me.”

But in that movement of light, colours and sounds the people weren’t looking at her, they were only concerned about themselves, about what they looked like, wonderful, fascinating or nonchalant.

For Nina, though, it didn’t matter what  people thought about her, only what he thought about her.

And while she was dancing and thinking of him intensely, he appeared like in a dream.                               

He was dancing frenetically, as if it was his only reason to live. Nina’s heart lighted up when their eyes met for a moment. It was just one second, just the time for a smile, then both turned their head. But he had looked at her, even if for just one second and she had felt so happy! Her eyes had found him but he had disappeared in that mixture of colours which flashed here and there, lighting up different faces with rather unconventional expressions, even though nobody could really care about.

She tried to find him again but he wasn’t there anymore. So she climbed up the stairs quickly and anxiously went to the bar, but he wasn’t there, like he wasn’t in the DJ’s room, he wasn’t in the corridor, he wasn’t in the sitting room and he wasn’t in the corridor, either.

Tired and breathless Nina came back to the dance floor and tried to remember how his voice was sweet and his smile reassuring.

She danced and danced until she got exhausted, loosing all her strength in the dance, she was dancing now in order to forget…or maybe in order to believe in something…she wanted to celebrate that strange Halloween where anything could happen.

The first notes of her favourite song in the air made her gorgeous and happy, as if her feet didn’t touch the floor while she was dancing.

 

Suddenly two gentle hands surrounded her hips and she could feel a light breath behind her shoulders.

She didn’t turn round immediately, she wanted to dream a little bit again, she wanted to believe he was the person who was surrounding her hips, he was sweetly whispering in her ear: “Everything is possible tonight, Nina”, and not an unknown guy. She didn’t even ask herself why that mysterious boy was so sweet to her or why he knew her name. She just wanted to dream about her perfect night.

But all of a sudden again she opened her eyes and everything seemed to stop. He was there, in front of her, with a tuft of hair falling over his eyes and with an embracing smile: Everything was standing still around and then there were only the two of them in the middle of the dance floor, under the mirror ball and they were exchanging glances. Nothing else could matter.

Unimportant were the three thousand people who were dancing, standing and sweating together on the dance floor, unimportant were the hundred people who were queuing up at the bar for something which could make them feel stronger, unimportant was the DJ and so were all the guys who were dancing to show off and to draw everybody’s attention.

He was getting nearer…

She could see those sincere eyes under his dark hair.

He was getting nearer and nearer…

She could see some sweat drops on his broad forehead .

Nearer…

She could feel his breath on her neck.

Nearer and nearer…

Now she could feel the taste of a magic kiss.

She sank into that kiss as if it was the last of that night and the first of her new life.

It was a kiss given in the middle of  a dancing club but all the same it was a cut off place, where anyone could be anybody else, in that strange Halloween night where everything could happen.

 

 

 

BENEDETTA CINI, class 2 D, Liceo Scientifico “C. Livi”, Prato

 

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